Sunday, October 31, 2010

ITERLOGUE (5

Expensive curtain dropped
on a scene for one purpose

X in grass playing oddly
given a chance for friendly

escape even doldrums
regard as energy at the peak

Expression suddenly far out
into absent reverse zone

with edges of violent action
that has made an obvious

decision throwing text down
and over projected balance

Support role conducive to
nature behind thick glass

treading rhythm necessary
to incessant buzz of traffic

spread over massive critical
holes in a bridge of thawed ice

3 comments:

  1. I like how you said:
    spread over massive critical
    holes in a bridge of thawed ice
    I think you should write a whole poem about this concept.

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  2. This time I like how you said:
    treading rhythm necessary
    to incessant buzz of traffic
    Spencer, a person has to read and study your poetry to make sense of it, I liked the way this one flowed! :-)

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  3. Hey Spencer-- Why don't you personalize your profile and complete it?

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