Expensive curtain dropped
on a scene for one purpose
X in grass playing oddly
given a chance for friendly
escape even doldrums
regard as energy at the peak
Expression suddenly far out
into absent reverse zone
with edges of violent action
that has made an obvious
decision throwing text down
and over projected balance
Support role conducive to
nature behind thick glass
treading rhythm necessary
to incessant buzz of traffic
spread over massive critical
holes in a bridge of thawed ice
I like how you said:
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holes in a bridge of thawed ice
I think you should write a whole poem about this concept.
This time I like how you said:
ReplyDeletetreading rhythm necessary
to incessant buzz of traffic
Spencer, a person has to read and study your poetry to make sense of it, I liked the way this one flowed! :-)
Hey Spencer-- Why don't you personalize your profile and complete it?
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